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This is it the finished version!

A request by :iconpopcorn-drama:

I'm sorry it took so long but with my Final Major Project going on at college it was hard to reach my computer but now its finish and I hope you like it =]

I'm not entirely satisfied with the background, I may improve it but I may not depends if I learn more about doing backgrounds X3

The characters from left to right: Kimmi :iconpopcorn-drama: Snofi :iconmentallyhilarious: and Me (Jay) :iconthe-loveless-lyric:

Critiques


:iconsuperjade74:
Hello, so this my first time writing a critique but I will do my best :)

Firstly, I like how you're working with perspectives e.g. the brown haired guys hand appears bigger because it is closer but keeping that in mind the arm and hand furthest away should be a bit smaller. It also looks a tad out of place. I suggest looking at human anatomy. Use references and you could even use a mirror to check yourself out a bit. See how the position of your character in the drawing should look :)

Secondly, the background. There appears to be stairs and a fence but they sort of collide with each other. Just watch out for that. Make sure its clear that the fence is in front of the stairs.

Apart from that I feel that you did a great job on this one! You are clearing very good at drawing faces and expressions. I wish you the best of luck with your art :D

I hope I helped and feel free to disagree with what I have said ^^
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:iconaki-t:
this is rly good dude!

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:iconcyrus4eva:
Awesome picture Niichan!
:iconmentallyhilarious:
O.O Shiny!! Wow, looks so awesome with colours ^^
Great job, I love it =]
:iconthe-loveless-lyric:
Thank you very much =]
I'm glad you like it =]

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